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Kaniksen Lyhyttarinoita

ViestiKirjoittaja Mkananoja » 21.10.2008, 18:28

Elikkäs juuh... lyhyttarinaa tuli pukattua ja päätin nyt sitte niille omat topickin tehä ku nämä eivät liity sins of the past fanfictioniin lainkaan.

pitemmittä puheitta lukuintoa!





Tears of lost hope

Earth ahead of her lies razed and scorched. Her former enemies lies down numb, breathless, lifeless.

The very life have fled the land here and far as she could see... or remember. Ashes have replaced green soft grass and gentle breeze changed into cold and hostile. Rivers are dry and now they are nothing else but scars on already dead land. What was supposed to be most beautiful forest never imaginable is now nothing else but painful monument of how things should have been. Sky what supposed to rival the very blue of sapphire is now dark red at day... or what is supposed to be a day and night where darker than emptiness she now felt in her hearth, not even stars she barely remember anymore is nowhere to be seen and moons... those twin moons she loved to watch when not occupied by deeds needed to be done, where now tinted to mimic the depressing colorless land she now sees under her pawns.

Is this what she wanted? Something she have worked hard to achieve is now there and now... was it worth it? She have done everything her master never wished for and this is the grant prize, the trophy for her deeds? To live in land where life is nothing but a history now?

Tear fled from her eye as she faintly remembered the live she oath to destroy so long ago. Oh how much she wanted to go back in time and change all that. If the very life of her would have been the prize to keep the land how it has been long ago... she would not hesitate to pay it. But now it was too late. live would never return on this world and those mindless minions of hers seek restlessly any sight of the remaining hope and crushed it once they have found it.

Second tear dropped on ashes between her forelegs. Strong as she has been forced to be is breaking up. Her master had no use for her any longer and his corrupting influence what would have kept her emotionless is now gone. She closed her eyes since more she watched, more it hurt to see what she have done.

Third tear escaped and her black serpent like body, twisted image of gorgeous young drakoness fell on ground; sobbing ever so faintly. She has never felt such sorrow, agony, the very mournful feeling she feels now. She knew she deserved it and let herself sink even deeber.




With all my heart



It has been few weeks since Amethyst has brought her here, in the dragon temple, what is supposed to be off limits to all but most urgent matters and yet she is here. Adalon where quite shocked to know that outcast, like he had said about himself actually lived in here within the temple. She had slowly recovered from her ordeal she had gone through because the bastard she just hopes to forget. Amethyst have had taken care of her during that time. Of course Guardians helped him and even Spyro and Cynder has paid few visits to her. When Adalon has met the Spyro the purple dragon, hero of dragon realms she quickly developed small crush on him. Would there be any dragoness who wouldn’t? He is strong, gorgeous, powerful, kind, smart, young and… purple… the very special dragon. She felt always uneasy around him. Her speech begun to shudder, she didn’t find the words to most simple sentence. Luckily to Adalon, he never picked up her affection towards him but Cynder did and she was everything but happy about this but hasn’t done anything else but glared on her and few growls to message he was already occupied. She had some feelings towards Amethyst too, being a purple and physically strong dragon but due of his other inabilities as a dragon, such as simple things like using any of the elemental skills or just like flying… No… Adalon considered him as a friend… nothing more. Amethyst of course was thrilled he had a new friend outside the temple but he still felt a bit empty. And he knew his incapabilities as being a dragon and therefore he knew his 'chance' having more than friendship where quite dim, if not nonexistent.

Amethyst sat on the balcony of the dragon temple, gazing the lively city underneath it and he sighed. Spyro walked across the door leading the balcony and he heard the faint sigh of his and he changed his direction towards him.

“Amethyst, you're alright?” He asked as he sat next to Amethyst. He glanced on Spyro and shrug his shoulders, one of the silly customs he had.

“I would like to say yes, but then I would be lying. Don't get this wrong but I feel a bit lonely here. It is not like I am. You and Cynder Are greatest friends I have and Sparx... well... he is Sparx but still...” He spoke quietly.

“Is it about her?” Spyro asked. He knew he had thing or two for Adalon, why else he would have been so 'nailed' being around her while she had her recovery.

“Well... I don't know. Part of me wants to become more that friends with her, but other part keeps telling me that it is not meant to happen, because I am pathetic excuse as a dragon.”

“Just don't let it come to you too hard. You're learning fast how to fly.” Spyro tried to comfort him with little success. Amethyst gave a small smile before he lost his enthusiasm and his mood sank again.

“You may be right but look at me. I'm 22 and you're only 17 and I am smaller than you! At this rate I am always smaller than everyone else, or her! And far as I know, it has always been vice versa”

“Most females keep smaller dragons cute.” Spyro said, knowing this would make him a bit embarrassed, and indeed it did.

“Maybe.” He smiled back and pushed him a bit with his paw.

“Just don't think about it too much.” Spyro said after he stood up again and turned to leave.

“Alright, I won't. I'll think I'll go tease Volteer a bit again. I love the look when his electric tongue gets tied up when asked to explain something complicated.” Amethyst replied with a chuckle and they both went back inside.

“Sparx! Lets go have some fun with babblemouth!” Amethyst shouted specify to nowhere

“I'm so with you!” came voice room or two away from them.

“You know, you should honor the elder, especially the guardians.” Spyro said to Amethyst when he took walk towards the library where Volteer most usually where to be found

“I am, but you live only once and good laughter extends your live! See ya!”





Later that day, while Amethyst was having a one sided conversation with Volteer, waiting the inevitable to occur again, Adalon found Spyro having one of his training sessions with the dummies on the training grounds within the temple. She sat and watched the purple hero attacking the dummies with various strikes and swipes, not to mention his multiple elemental breaths he has mastered over the years. She watched him in admiration and her feelings took better of her. Spyro saw green figure with corner of his eyes and paused his training for a minute to take a breath.

“Hi”

“Hi Adalon, what brings you here?” Spyro said after a second after he had caught up with his breath.

“Nothing in particular, just heard something and came to see who it was. Have to tell you. You where quite amazing there.”

“Thanks. How are you doing?”

“Good I guess. Better by the day.” Adalon blushed a bit. There was something she wasn't telling and Spyro noticed this.

“I am glad to hear that.” Spyro answered. Sparx flew into the same room while holding his head with his both hands.

“Unh... my head... mother of all headaches... how Amethyst can listen him without fainting from fact overload” He muttered to himself. He noticed Green and Purple on corner of his eye and it didn't took long him to realize its Adalon and Spyro, who where totally oblivious of him.

“And I... I think I have small crush on someone.” Adalon said after a moment of awkward silence and stared away from him shyly. 'Ooh... this is more interesting' Sparx thought and flew to take cover behind the door frame and eavesdrop them.

“Well thats great! Who is the lucky dragon then?” Spyro asked now curious and a bit exited. Adalon blushed a bit more and motioned him to come closer so she could whisper it to him

“I... well... its...” She muttered, blushing even more. Spyro leaned closer to hear her better. Suddenly she leaned forward as well and licked his cheek.

“It's you.” She whispered before he had the chance to pull back. He was quite shocked from the 'kiss' as he have totally expected her being towards Amethyst, not him. Sparx jaw dropped, leaving his mouth wide open.

“Adalon. I...” Spyro backed away from her quickly. And almost stumbled on his own tail.

“But it is true.” She said with more comfort as the secret has been told. Sparx flew away from the room.

“Adalon... Spyro? Oh god...” Sparx tried to melt the new twist in his head and figure what he should react to it, but getting nothing. He flew small circles thinking hard before it hit him. Cynder. How she would react to this? Should she know?

“I can't tell her, she'll murder me... but if I don't and she finds out she will torture me! Barbecue me! And murder me!” He spoke half in panic yet he somehow restrained himself going totally nuts. 'Amethyst could help! No... he is with Volteer... one more word from him and my head explodes! I'm so going to regret this.' Sparx took of and went to search. Reluctantly he went for search for one particular black dragoness, evil she-dragon of doom like he usually referred her, known as Cynder.



After few good minutes Sparx found her taking sunpath in the sunny garden in middle of flower lea. Sparx felt like he was 'walking' into his execution but despite his head shouted 'run as far as you can, as fast as you can' he flew over her and poked one of her horns strong enough that she would feel it. Cynder stirred from her nap and yawned deep. It didn't take long her brains to register that horribly familiar buzz.

“What is it Sparx?” Cynder said while just getting more comfortable and without opening her eyes.

“I ee... aa... It's ehh...” Sparx mumbled indistinctly. This caught Cynder's curiosity well enough to get her really up. She stretched briefly. 'Why he would be so nervous?' she thought.

“Okay Sparx. What you have done this time? Broke jar or two? Peed into pool of visions?” Cynder asked intrigued.

“It's not me aa... how I can put this... ehh...”

“Not about you? Then who?”

“It's eh... About Spyro...” Sparx pushed tips of his fingers together, glancing away from her nervously. Cynder rose her eyebrow, waiting him to continue.

“...And Adalon...” Cynder's alarms started to ring. She has been too aware Adalon's feelings towards purple dragon, HER purple dragon.

“What they did?” Cynder asked, already bearing her teeth.

“Well... they... they kinda.... kis-- GWAH!” Sparx speech where cut on short when Cynder grasped him into her paw and squeezed thigh.

“Where is she!?” Cynder growled. Sparx' mouth moved but nothing came out. She squeeze too hard and he is unable to breath because of it.

“WHERE?!?” she yelled louder and shook him. Sparx managed to pull one of his arms free from her grasp and pointed his neck. Realizing this she dropped him on ground but she was still in very, very bad mood. Murderous. Sparx dropped on ground with faint thud and he inhaled very loudly before he began coughing. Cynder lowered her head and stared him very furiously right into his eye and black smoke rose out from her nostrils.

“Where?” She simply asked. Sparx turned more pale than lack of air has turned him into

“Training grounds...” Sparx whispered and with that answer she sprinted right into the temple, leaving Sparx to recover from what he thought would be end of him. Cynder reached the temple doors she didn't have the patience to wait the doors to open for her but instead she pushed the doors wide open with loud bang, startling every single living being in the temple as the loud noise she made echoed within the halls. But she didn't waste time nor thought about the noise she made and she ran fast, using her wings to speed up further and it didn't took even a minute when she came across the doorway leading to training grounds and where Spyro and... that wretched green backstabber, Adalon where. Spyro has been pushed against one of the many live-sized dummies and Adalon where dangerously close to him, almost nuzzle to nuzzle. The Loud bang that have echoed just few seconds before she ran inside the same room as them have left Spyro and Adalon alarmed but when they saw Cynder or more specifically: her face, both of them where at least to say; shocked. Adalon quickly backed away from Spyro.

“You... you venomous... sadistic green dirt of a lizard!” Cynder growled while she walked slowly towards Adalon, keeping her head low, ready to strike swiftly. Adalon for her part, backed away from her.

“Cynder... I--” Adalon tried to speak out but swallowed instead when Cynder whipped her tail towards one of the dummies next to her and dummy lost it's arm and head with a snap.

“How dare you... How dare you touch my love!” Cynder shouted and by the looks of it, she where about to leap on Adalon which would lead into fierce, one-sided fight. Adalon was bigger, larger than other dragonesses around her age but she was not a fighter. She would not have a change against Cynder. Spyro realized this and tried to cut in.

“Cynder, Stop!” Spyro walked between the two dragonesses, halting Cynder.

“Don't get on my way Spyro, you get your part once I am trough WITH HER!” Cynder roared and despite Spyro's efforts, she jumped over him with ease and leaped upon Adalon. Adalon didn't have enough time to do anything else but stay still as she struck upon her and the inertia of her leap pushed her across the floor. Wasting no time Cynder jumped back up and ran towards her again. Adalon stumbled back up terrified but ready to fight back. She had barely got back up again when Cynder where all upon her. Slashing, clawing, whipping, kicking and headbutting, everything she knew of and kept attacking Adalon. Adalon couldn't do nothing else but keep dodging poorly as best she could but she already had several bruises and small claw wounds but what she had been able to do is keep that deadly tailblade of her away. One hit from that and its all over and ironically, because Cynder where so furious she didn't use her elemental and other abilities which would be at least deadly as her tail. Spyro tried to stop Cynder several times but she just pushed him away with a snarl and kept attacking Adalon. The loud noise attracted Amethyst into the training grounds and Volteer where just behind him.

“Amethyst! Help me!” Adalon screamed between Cynder fierce attacks. She didn't dare ask Spyro's help as she was terrified what Cynder would do if she did. Mentioning new name distracted Cynder long enough To Adalon gain some distance to the black dragon.
“STOP THIS UNMEANINGFUL HOSTILITY AT THIS VERY INS
TANT!!!” Volteer shouted from bottom of his lungs and small sparks and arcs of electricity ran across his scales. Everyone in room halted into place shocked. But Cynder where the first to recover and she just snarled towards the guardian before she locked her gaze back upon Adalon. Spyro and Amethyst realized she would not stop and she must be stopped before she would seriously hurt Adalon but they both where too late. Cynder made final lunge towards Adalon who where too distracted from Volteer's interfere and she caught Cynder's tail dead on her side, leaving large bleeding cut where she was hit. Adalon stumbled backwards her eyes wide. Cynder smirked and inhaled, prepairing to use one of her fearsome breaths but before she could unleash it, Spyro and Amethyst tackled her and pushed her against the ground and holding her there tight. Cynder shrieked and tried to get up several times but she put less effort after every try and once she stopped, she began to cry hard.



Volteer walked up to Adalon who where still standing there shocked, her eyes wide open. He lowered his large head at the level of her's

“Adalon, it's me. Are you hurt?” Volteer tried to speak up slowly and most calm he could with simple words. Her wound wasn't that bad but if not taken care, it could become one. Adalon's eyes locked upon him but her facial expression never changed. When Volteer opened his mout to speak up again Adalon's eyes moved back upon the black dragoness held down by two purple dragons and thought her chock Adalon screamed and ran pass the yellow guardian, pass trio of dragons and outside.

“Adalon!” Amethyst shouted after her and got up from on top of Cynder.

“Volteer! Take care of Cynder! Spyro, you come with me! Amethyst started to giving orders without thinking and yet very determined. Surprisingly Volteer subtitled to this sudden command and nodded. Amethyst took few running steps.

“But Cynder...” Spyro spoke up, not willing to leave her at her current state. Adalon stopped into doorway.

“Now! I can't fly!” Amethyst shouted and ran outside after Adalon. Spyro got up reluctantly.

“I'm sorry Cynder. I love you.” He said before he ran outside as well. Volteer walked up to Cynder and picked her up and took her into warm embrace.

“There there Cynder... It's okay... It is okay.”



Adalon ran outside the temple and down the hill with Amethyst and Spyro few dozen meters after her. She led them within the dragonvillage. Many curious dragons watched as green dragoness and two purple dragons ran trough roads and alleys into middle of the town where single but beautifully crafted fountain and local marketplace where. But Amethyst nor Spyro did have the time for sightseeing. They had to get Adalon to stop and calm down.

“Adalon stop! You're hurt!” Amethyst shouted after her when she took turn into one of the alleys.

“How long you think she can run?” Spyro asked.

“How on earth I should know? Just let's keep on with her! She must be exhausted before long!” Amethyst answered when both of them ran into same alley where she had moment ago. Adalon kept running towards outskirts the town and towards the river what where popular swimming place nowadays.

“Adalon please! We want to help you!” Amethyst shouted again but in vain. She was getting exhausted from all the running and both him and Spyro where gaining her. 'Just few more steps!' He thought. Adalon where running directly towards the river and duo where just behind her and when Amethyst where to leap onto her in order make her stop she jumped instead above the water and spread her wings. Amethyst realized that they where closer the river than he thought and tried to stop but the wet grass made the ground slippery but he managed to halt just on the edge of the river. But before he realized thought, Spyro crashed onto him since his sudden halt sure surprised him and both of them, Amethyst first and Spyro just after him, fell into the water with huge splash. Spyro where first to surface. He coughed lightly and glanced around. Aladon where nowhere to be seen. He heard giggle just next to him and he noticed that they both has just fell in between two dragonesses who where having bath and otherwise enjoying the fresh water. Spyro smiled nervously since one of the girls he knew too well: Ember.

“Hi Spyro. What a gift from the heavens you are, dropping right here next to me. You think this is fate hmm, handsome?” Ember Said seductively and giggled again with her overgirlish voice again.

“Hi... err Ember. I... I need to go. You seen Amethyst?”

“The another purple dragon?”

“Yeah, him.”

“You're standing on top of him.” Ember answered and pointed under the water with a giggle, again. Spyro Glanced under the water and his eyes shot wide open, he is standing on him! He quicly jumped off him and pulled his head above the water. Amethyst coughed violently almost immediately after he was resurfaced.

“What are you *cough* trying to drown me?! *hack hack* Where's Ad- *cough* Adalon?”

“Sorry but I think we lost her.” Spyro replied.

“You mean the green dragoness?” Ember asked intrigued.

“You saw where she went?” Amethyst asked in hurry.

“Yeah. I will tell you if this handsome dragon here agrees going out with me some day. Somewhere... romantic.” Ember said, moving closer to Spyro and pulling him into small hug.

“Ember, you know I can't promise that.” Spyro answered and sneaked out from her embrace.

“Split it out Amber.” Amethyst cut in

“Ember.” She corrected

“Ember, where did she go?”

“She landed just other side of the river.” she pointed out where Adalon has went.

“Thanks Amber! Spyro, Let's go!” Amethyst said behind himself when he already started to swim across the river.

“It's Ember! Shees...” Two dragons came to the other side and immediacy started to scout surroundings but after few hour they still don't have a clue where she might have been gone.



“Amethyst, its getting late. We should head back to temple.”

“We need to find her!”

“It comes dark soon. She is a earth dragoness and we're in middle of the forest, you might not notice her even if she where just next to you.”

“But she's hurt and she needs help!”

“The wound she got looked worse that it really is. I'm sure she'll be okay.”

“But.... but if something would happen to her I could not forgive myself.”

“Come on Amethyst, We cant find her in the dark. Lets try again tomorrow.” Spyro reasoned. Amethyst let sorrowful sigh and nodded lightly. Spyro turned around to leave. Amethyst rose his head stared into the quickly darkening scene in front of him as the sun traveled lower and lower into the horizon. A single tear fled from his eye and fell onto the soft grass underneath him.

“Adalon... I love you...” Amethyst whispered, hoping that she would hear him no matter what the distance where. He turned around and walked up to Spyro and headed back to temple. Unknown to him or Spyro, they have been very close of discovering her in her hiding spot, just mere steps away where they have stopped and she have heard them talking, but she have never heard anything more clearly what Amethyst have just whispered to her, 'I love you'.



Later at the night when duo have returned to the temple Spyro have immediacy went off to find Cynder and comfort her as best he could. He was one of the main reasons of the day's ordeal afterall. Cynder have calmed down considerably but where still quite upset. Amethyst on the other paw head onto balcony and he slumped onto the railing, letting his forepaws hang into the air freely while his head rested on it. He knew what that fight earlier where all about. Even the most stupidest one around would have figured it out. But he couldn't blame Spyro. Who wouldn't have a crush on him, the savior and hero of the dragon realms. The banisher of Dark Master, bringer of the hope and peace. But it still hurt to know that Adalon has fell love to him. Hoping that he could just die out there into his misery he began sobbing lightly. Time passed, he didn't know how long he have been on there but he really didn't care. He was totally oblivious what happened behind him. Group of three dragons whispered with each other and with the nod of two, the third one tenderly walked behind Amethyst.

Amethyst felt someone's presence but he paid no thought for it who it might be. He sighed.

“What you want?” He said coldly and with tint of depression he where now having. No answer. Amethyst groaned and turned around.

“Okay, what... you... you...” He tried to say but lost his words once he saw who it where. His jaw moved up n' down like if he where trying to speak but nothing came out from his mouth.

“Hi.” The dragoness answered.

“A-a... Adalon? It... It is really you?” Amethyst managed to say and she nodded with a smile. Amethyst dashed towards her and took her into strong tight hug. Adalon where caught by surprise by this and she blushed a bit. Amethyst soon realized what he where doing and quickly let her go and laughed nervously. Desperate changing the subject he opened his mouth.

“Are you ok? Does it hurt? Do you need help? You sure you're not hurt? You where hurt right?” Amethyst started to shooting question, not giving really room for her to answer. Adalon made him stop by raising her pawn and running it across his nuzzle.

“Back at the forest, Did you mean what you said?” Adalon asked quietly.

“You... you heard us?” Amethyst asked embarrassed.

“Yes. Before you left you said something. Did you really mean it?” she asked again. Amethyst didn't have to bonder this question for long but he still couldn't answer right away. It was the moment he thought would never come and yet here she is right front of him, asking the very question if he really loved her. Mentally swallowing the lump he finally answered.

“Yes. I love you with all my heart.” Amethyst said warmly and with that Adalon leaned and gave a kiss filled by deep passion. Her kiss left him a bit dumbstruck but it didn't took long him to answer to the kiss. The one of the dragons who have observed the scene which took place on the balcony sighed happily and leaned her head on shoulder of the other.

“Isn't that beautiful moment?” Cynder asked

“I can't agree with you more. Cynder, I'm sorry about the things that happened earlier.” Spyro apologized from her.

“No need to. I should have knew you better... It's just I overreacted or something and I couldn't hold it back. Of course it would drive everyone overjealous but still... And besides, that was like 6th time you apologized me from that.” Cynder smiled.

“I do love you more than anything.”

“mhmm... Perhaps I should make out with another male just to see how jealous you would become.” She said seductively.

“That's not funny Cynder. I am sorry about that.”

“7th time...”

“Sorry...” Spyro joked

“8th time”

“So sorry.” he said eyes half closed, staring into the deep emerald eyes of hers.

“mhmm... keep it up so I might just forgive you.”

“One more time?”

“Please...” Cynder purred and kissed him and pulled him away from the balcony entrance to get some privacy and leave another couple to have their special moment alone.

After a while they have placed themselves she leaned to a wall behind her and partially laid on her back and Amethyst placed himself against her soft chest so he could gaze upon the stars while listening her steady and calm hearth. This position where a bit awkward to her since her legs where unsupported and she had to twist her tail under her so it would be a bit more conformable but other than that, she didn't mind. They both gazed upon the stars, looking if they could find constellations what would remind of someone or something and they both shared a kiss once they saw single shooting star fly across the sky.





Night of memories
Clean version



They both gazed upon the stars, looking if they could find constellations what would remind of someone or something. Adalon, deep green earthdragon with brown strongly backwards curved horns and one smaller set of straight horns just under the first one. Her underbelly where lightbrown and like all other earthdragons around, she had strong figure. she leaned to wall behind her and partially laid on her back and Amethyst, Dark purple dragon with one set of white horns that pointed directly backward and two small sets back of his jaw. He had golden eyes and yellow crests leading from his forehead to his tail and he had yellow underbelly and his wings where yellow alike. He placed himself against her soft chest so he could continue to gaze upon the stars while listening her steady and calm hearth. This position where a bit awkward to her since her legs where unsupported and she had to twist her tail under her so it would be a bit more conformable but other than that, she didn't mind.

“Its good to have you here. No one else really ever had actually tried to be even friendly to me, besides of Spyro and Cynder, and rest of the gang of course. But...” Amethyst spoke out and sighed.

“Hmh... They don't know what they have lost when they turned you down, but I know you better. You're the sweetest, most gorgeous dragon and you are most true in hearth I've never came across with.” Adalon answered and began to pet his head and snout softly with her gorgeous pawn and placed another on his chest.

“About that...” Amethyst trailed off and looked her to her eyes but she just shook her head gently.

“Shhh...” She said softly and continued to stroke him. Amethyst decided that perhaps it is better to tell the truth later and he returned his eyes on stars. They both shared the romantic moment and cherished every second of it, hoping that could be there forever. Comfort from being near her, listening her lullaby hearth and feeling her gentle pawn stroking his cheek soon made him sleepy and his eyelids began dropping. After few futile attempt trying to keep himself awake he gave up and drifted into lands of sleep. Adalon sighed happily when he felt him becoming relaxed and noticing his eyes had closed. She twisted her wings from behind her and laid them on top of him to keep him warm even thought nigh wasn't really that cold and kept petting him. She didn't feel sleepy at all but she had nothing else in her mind what she should do but just enjoy his presence and feeling his warm scales against hers.



She began thinking her own past, several months back and how her former 'boyfriend'; the very word describing him sickened her more than anything else; abused her. He told he loved him and she went and believed him and thought she loved him back. Several weeks they hanged with each other and when the first kiss came it felt so special. Now she would give almost anything to forget that memory that made her feel pain inside her being. And the first time they mated... she just shuddered from the memory and tried to push it aside quickly before she felt most sickening feeling ever possible but it got only replaced by another memory what she also wanted to get rid of.. When she discovered she was nothing but matingtool for him. She remembered how one what should have been love her and only her hanging with another, older wind dragoness who had already got her more curvy outlook, sexier like few would say to add up already the curvy body what wind dragons naturally had, and he where making out with her. Her hearth where broken in a instant but being strong in nature she ran on to them and pushed them apart from each other and demanded to know what the hell he was doing. For Adalon's surprise he looked at least to say annoyed and said coldly that he was “having fun with my loved one“. Adalon yelled that he said he loved her, not the older dragoness but only received chuckling back from him. He said he needed the 'experience' so he could hang around with more mature company and since she was inexperienced and lone dragoness since she wasn't exactly the most beautiful dragoness around in concept of dragons so she where a “easy target“. Her already crushed hearth literally fell apart into thousands of pieces from his sentence and her eyes where filled with uncountable tears. She slashed him with all her might with her exposed claws and hit him to his cheek and left three deep, bleeding wounds.

Before he recovered from hit or his dragoness from chock she turned around and ran, ran faster that she ever had before into the forest and cried violently all the long way to the very small cave she had claimed for her own. She curled herself on cold stone and sobbed, tears flooding via her cheeks on ground. Cursing Him from about anything her mind came across in that fragile moment and cursed herself of being so stupid and blind. Adalon cried in few days inside her little cave, never coming even out during that time, nor anyone bothering to search for her. She sobbed from morning till night and fell asleep while sobbing only to awake next morning to cry some more. It didn't took long before her body suffered from dehydration and therefore she where unable to release more tears but she sobbed nevertheless even if her throat where so dry she felt it burning and she didn't come out till next day.

Already weakened from food and severe lack of water she finally came out from her cave, her deep green scales have turned more pale and you could see faint lines of ribs thought her chest. Still very upset about what has happened she stumbled out from her cave and barely managed to walk to nearest pond for drink. She tried to lower herself carefully on ground but her legs gave out and she fell with loud thud. She moaned briefly before she lifted her head and lowered it to drink. She spent almost half an hour just drinking slowly and carefully while painful memories still plagued her mind but unable to cry because of it anymore. After she felt like she have drunk half of the pond she finally lifted her head from cold water and curled herself for rest, allowing her body absorb the water in peace. After few hours she snapped from her sleep when some birds poked her. Not chocked by this she yawned which scared the birds off and she felt that she had more strength now, although still weak. But this is the start she thought. Knowing she didn't exactly have the energy to hunt for herself she decided to see if there where any leftovers from others' preys. Travelling from vicinity of her cave she came across several devoured animals but they where already become uneatable or there where nothing left expect few bones.




After she where almost to lose her hope finding anything she came to clearing and far end of it she saw one large wild beast slain and dragon's tail weeping from behind it occasionally before it went behind it's prey. She first hesitated should she just go and ask could she had some or wait till whoever where eating it would leave. Few moments passed before she swallowed her pride and begun walking across the opening. Her nostrils picked up the scent of the fallen beast and while she tried not to, drool began to gather up in her mouth. Once she got close and heard someone eating a bit soundly the animal behind it. Purple tail poked out from cover before it vanished again. Scent where overwhelming and she tried hard as she could from just jumping in and eating much as possible. Adalon swallowed excess saliva.

“Excuse me?” Adalon spoke out with rasping voice. Purple tail what once again where on sight stopped and so did the voices of eating as well. Next what she saw she would never forget. Dark purple dragon pushed his head from behind the prey and his golden eyes stared at her... First of course annoyed because his eating had been disrupted but it quickly softened when he saw what have caught his attention. He had single set of ivorywhite straight horns back of his head and two small sets of horns from end of his jaw.he had yellow crests middle of his forehead and which continued straight back of his head and along his spine all the way to tip of his tail where silver simple tailblade where. His chest and underbelly where yellow like his crests and his large wings alike. 'Oh... A male... Of course...' She thought. Still having strong memories what had happened not too long ago, males didn't have the greatest reputation in her mind. He kept staring at her and his jaw dropped, dropping small piece of meat he where eating moment before. Feeling a bit stupid Adalon where about to abandon her plans of ever asking could she have some and where just about to leave when Purple dragon finally spoke out.

“What happened to you? You look starving!” Purple dragon said worried. Adalon stopped on her tracks and glanced over him again.

“I... Could I... Oh forget it.” She said hesitating before her pride once again kicked in.

“No no no wait! Of course you can!” Purple dragon said quickly. Within a brief moment he had noticed her skinny outlook and learned that she where indeed starving and small drooldrips on her lips gave away the idea as well. And he already felt sorry for her.

“Can I?” She asked again. Keeping her eyes fixed on ground.

“Yes, of course! Knock yourself out. There is far more that I could eat up anyway.” Purple dragon replied and tried to smile. 'Knock yourself out? What that supposed to mean?' Adalon thought. She didn't notice him smiling thought and just walked slowly to opposite side of animal.

“Thanks.” She simply said before instincts overcame her mind and begun literally gobble the food. Other dragon gazed upon her while she ate a bit worried.

“You shouldn't eat so fast, you could actually kill yourself with that speed.” He said

“Why you would care?” Adalon replied a bit more coldly that she first indented.

“I'm... Sorry if I hurt your feelings but I'm just concerned about you, that's all.” Purple dragon continued. She didn't reply and kept eating, although she slowed down like he had suggested. He sighed when he didn't get any reply and continued eating from his side. Male dragon where soon to meet his limit and got up again to take better look the green dragon on other side without her knowing. Adalon kept eating few more minutes before she was alarmed that she could not hear him eating. She stopped and lifted her head to see if he where actually anywhere nearby at all but she startled when she saw him staring at her just behind the beast. Male quickly turned his head away from her embarrassed.

“What you where looking at?” Adalon asked even if she knew perfectly what he was staring at.

“Oh... Nothing....” He replied nervously

“Pff... Males... all the same.” She said. Thought struck into male's head and turned his head again to her.

“A male dragon did that to you?” He asked, waiting for conformation to his theory.

“Yes. A male! Now if you excuse me that I don't have the greatest trust to likes of you, could you let me eat?” She snapped at him. Male frowned at her

“Males... Females... ALL OF THE DRAGONS ARE THE SAME! I have never done anything wrong to anyone and yet everyone threats me like a outcast! Someone you can split at when you're bored! Something you can pick upon when you feel uneasy! Know this and know this well: I've NEVER seen you before and have NEVER done anything wrong to you and in fact I let you share my kill from my own free fill so I could help you and this is the gratitude I get? You can have the whole thing if you want, I don't care!” Male shouted furiously and begun to walk away from her. Adalon where utterly chocked from his outburst and felt quilt how she have acted towards him. Abandoning the plans to eat she ran front of him and halting him. He frown at her but waited patiently her explain whatever that would be. Adalon lowered her head in shame.

“I'm Sorry I said earlier. It's just that... I've been through a lot lately and that male you asked about... He...” She began to sob faintly but she snapped out of it when she felt pawn on her shoulder. She gazed up with her eyes already flooded by tears and saw him a concerned and yet somehow calming look.

“It's okay, I understand. You know... I've been through a lot myself too and I shouldn't have snapped that easily. I apologize from that.” Male said. Adalon just nodded before she buried him into tight embrace and cried loudly over his shoulder. Male being chocked for second and not knowing what to do for few more seconds he patted her gently on her pack.

“It's okay now... He can't hurt you any more. Let it all come out.” He said softly as he could. Few minutes later he noticed that she where calming down he slowly pushed himself out from her embrace and let his eyes meet hers.




“What is your name green dragoness?” He asked. She sniffed

“Adalon.” She simply answered. Purple dragon gave a smile.

“That is beautiful name... I am...” He hesitated for a moment. “I am called Amethyst” She first suspected where that his name at all since it was hardly a name for any dragon but she didn't mind.

“Isn't that--” She where about ask but Amethyst cut out.

“Yes... it's a purple gem, I know. But it is my name nevertheless.” He said rolling his eyes slightly.

“It suits you.” Adalon answered with a faint smile. Amethyst smiled back briefly.

“Say, do you have a place to live? I don't want to intrude or anything, just curious.” He asked

“Oh... well... I live in small cave not too--” Adalon first hesitated and before she could finish her phrase Amethyst cut in again.

“Small cave? Oh that won't do. That is hardly a place for young dragoness in your condition to live.”

“Young? You are hardly anywhere near in my age young male.” Adalon replied quickly. There where no way dragon like him could be that old he could say out loud something like that.

“Oh you would be so surprised if I where tell my age.”

“How so?” She asked now interested.

“Some other time maybe. But what I was about to say that I have perfect place to you to live long as needed.” He said and began to lead her towards his destination.

“In your cave? Are you trying to hit me?” She asked. 'He is just like others males afterall.' She thought.

“Heh, it's a bit more than a cave or anything near it and no... I'm not trying to hit you either. It just leaves painful spot where ever you would hit someone.” Amethyst answered. Adalon looked upon him, not exactly knowing is he just joking around or didn't he really understand what she asked.

“No... you didn't understand what I asked. I asked you are you trying to... err... to make me to your girlfriend.” She asked and got satisfied when she saw that Amethyst stopped right onto his tracks. He turned his head nervously towards her and she smiled when she saw that he was clearly embarrassed, his cheeks has turned to lighter, almost pink in colour.

“I a... No... Oh no I'm not trying to make you to my girlfriend. Honestly.” He shuddered the words out.

“Whatever you say.” She said smiling and walked pass him.

“No no no! Honest!” Amethyst spoke out loud when he caught up with her again. He still blushed but not so badly anylonger.

“If you say so. Hmm... This a-bit-more-than-cave of yours, where is it?” She asked.

“Oh... It's just this way. Follow me.” Amethyst said, glad that she had changed the subject. They didn't travel far before Adalon got suspicious again. 'He is leading me towards Dragon temple! Caves around there are very hard to get, not to mention houses built there. Surely outcast like he said he is could not live up there now could he?' She thought puzzled.

“Amethyst?”

“Yes?”

“Where you're going?” Adalon asked.

“To this a-bit-more-than-a-cave place.” Amethyst answered with small grin.

“But is is the village up there! Do you actually live up there?” She asked even more confused

“Yes and no... Just follow me and you'll see yourself. I have few interesting friends that I'm sure you would love to meet. Minus one of course but nevertheless.” He answered and gave even bigger smile. He had totally confused her and had no intend telling more. When they came to the edge of the dragon village but Amethyst didn't walk into it like Adalon first thought but instead walking along small stoned path going around the town and leading up the hill where... 'He can't be serious!' She thought.

“Amethyst, you can't be serious, This leads to Dragon temple! It's forbidden any dragon to go there unless its urgent or requested to come!”

“Heh. But today the doors are open for you. That I guarantee to you.” Amethyst said confident.



'Oh and how right he was.' Adalon still remembers how she met the hero of dragon realms, Spyro and the one that once where under the influence of dark master, Cynder. She thought Cynder where still evil and thought it where foolish having her around but once she get to know to her Adalon's thought towards her have completely changed and now she where her best friend. She actually where terrified by the guardians when she first came across with them whitin the temple but they turned out to be very friendly and understanding. 'And that minus one.' She chuckled a bit. 'What a annoying little dragonfly Sparx can be.' She wondered how anyone could stand with his sarcastic and always complaining attitude. She lowered her gaze on sleeping dragon on her embrace. 'Who could have ever thought that Amethyst, the outcast like he had said long ago from himself actually lived in Dragon Temple? What is his story?' She wondered. 'Oh I'm sure he will tell when he feels ready for it.' She felt Amethyst moving slightly to get more comfortable whilst sleeping. Adalon smiled and kissed him to his forehead and wrapped her tail around him tightly and he responded letting out faint moan. She closed her eyes since she felt that night where becoming old and she where getting sleepy as well.

“Oh How much I love you my purple gem.” She whispered and kissed him to forehead once more before she joined to him in land of dreams.
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Re: Kaniksen Lyhyttarinoita

ViestiKirjoittaja Muzuzu » 16.11.2008, 23:34

Saako näihin kommentoida? Luin tuon ensimmäisen ja pidin. Lievistä kielioppivirheisä(tai typoista?) huolimatta mainio pätkä, hyvin välittyi henkilön(mahtoiko olla lohikäärme? Tuosta lopusta voisi niin päätellä) aikaansaama tuho, ja katumuksensa ja tarkoitusperiensä kyseenalaistaminen tulivat esiin myös voimakkaana, ainakin itse ne bongasin sieltä selkeästi. ''Terminaattorin'' katumus ja kuolema, jeah. o/

Eli joo, tiedät selkeesti mitä haluat sanoa, nyt vaan kiinnität huomiota siihen miten sanot. Puhun nyt siis aivan mitättömistä seikoista - sanojen oikeinkirjoituksesta(tyyliin yksi kirjain väärä tjsp.) ja jonkin sanan taivutus tai aikamuoto pisti silmään, mutta ymmärsin silti 100% pätkästä. En kehota jättämään englanniksi kirjoittamista(niinku mun mielipitteellä edes mitään väliä oliskaan, doh! :rolleyes:: ), parempaa enkkua tuo on kuin keskimäärin ja suomi se vasta rajoitteinen kieli onkin. Tais tulla enemmän tekstiä kielestä kun tarinasta, oops.

Tuon jälkimmäisen luen kun jaksan, nyt nukuttaa.
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Re: Kaniksen Lyhyttarinoita

ViestiKirjoittaja Mkananoja » 31.01.2009, 22:30

Muzuzu kirjoitti:Saako näihin kommentoida? Luin tuon ensimmäisen ja pidin. Lievistä kielioppivirheisä(tai typoista?) huolimatta mainio pätkä, hyvin välittyi henkilön(mahtoiko olla lohikäärme? Tuosta lopusta voisi niin päätellä) aikaansaama tuho, ja katumuksensa ja tarkoitusperiensä kyseenalaistaminen tulivat esiin myös voimakkaana, ainakin itse ne bongasin sieltä selkeästi. ''Terminaattorin'' katumus ja kuolema, jeah. o/

Eli joo, tiedät selkeesti mitä haluat sanoa, nyt vaan kiinnität huomiota siihen miten sanot. Puhun nyt siis aivan mitättömistä seikoista - sanojen oikeinkirjoituksesta(tyyliin yksi kirjain väärä tjsp.) ja jonkin sanan taivutus tai aikamuoto pisti silmään, mutta ymmärsin silti 100% pätkästä. En kehota jättämään englanniksi kirjoittamista(niinku mun mielipitteellä edes mitään väliä oliskaan, doh! :rolleyes:: ), parempaa enkkua tuo on kuin keskimäärin ja suomi se vasta rajoitteinen kieli onkin. Tais tulla enemmän tekstiä kielestä kun tarinasta, oops.

Tuon jälkimmäisen luen kun jaksan, nyt nukuttaa.


Jos näihin ei saisi kommentoida olisin laittanu punaisilla kissankokoisilla kirjaimilla että irti ja lukottanu perään. Mutta ei, näihin ei saa vaan näihin pitää kommenoida! ^^
Ei vaiskaa mutta kaikki kommentointi/kritiikki on aina tervetullutta.

Juuh, Tearssis kyseessä on lohikäärme. Se ei ilmene heti alusta mutta tulee selville kumminki loppuakohden.

Olen kyllä tietoinen omasta enkun 'taitamattomuudestani' ja aina kun näitä kirjoittelen saatan välillä vilkaista vanhoja pätkiä ja vilkaista oikeinkirjoitusta, mutta valitettavan usein virheet eivät aina osu silmiini. Itseaisassa olit ensimmäinen joka sanoi 'aikamuoto' pelkän kirjoitusvirheen/typon lisäksi. nyt ainakin pystyn keskittymään virheiden etsimiseen ja korjaamiseen sen osalta.

mutta ei mitään. Kiitoksia kommentista!

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Re: Kaniksen Lyhyttarinoita

ViestiKirjoittaja Conservatation » 08.03.2009, 13:14

Luin ekan ja oli hiano.
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