Runo: Flames

[Verinen]

Im a maker of fire, master of flames.
I know thousands of names,
that think I am insane.
But that's not true, that's just lame.

Is it wrong, if i just want to see red,
Is it wrong, if i just want to see yellow.
Is it wrong, if i just want to feel heat.
Come on, have a seat.

Around the fire, you become pure.
There is nothing you should fear.

Tuli 99 fm, ohopsista

[judester]

Tykkäsin! 9 ½.
lyhyet suomenkieliset runot alkaa olla tylsiä.
Hyvä kun ei ollu joka kohassa samalla tavalla riimiä (eli 2x sama loppu aina kun 2 rivii (sry jos ette älynneet))

[Verinen]

Ai niin ku mul oli tämmönenki runo
Juu se 99 fm tuli että hupsahti.